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Business Writing Tips from The Writing Center


Eliminate Wordiness - Step 1
May 17, 2007

Delete words that don't add meaning.

Most of us are guilty of using unnecessary words in our writing. Sometimes we fall into the habit of writing what other people write. Or we may write what we hear and speak. But good writers use only those words that add information to their sentences.

Review this list of common meaningless modifiers:

actually kind of
basically particular
certain practically
definitely really
different various
generally very
given virtually

How often do you use words like these?

Consider the following example:

A plant supervisor supports the need for a budget increase with this statement:
Actually, we basically anticipate increasing overtime for individual operators.

Is this a strong, efficient statement? What words can you eliminate to increase the effectiveness of this sentence?

Let's eliminate ACTUALLY, BASICALLY, and INDIVIDUALLY and then read the sentence again:
We anticipate increasing overtime for operators.

Now it's easy to see how unnecessary words dull the sentence and obscure its meaning. Watch for and eliminate unnecessary words like actually and basically in your own sentences.

Next we'll explore how to identify and eliminate meaningless phrases..


This edition was adapted from our Effective Business Writing Program. Previous editions may be read at http://www.uliveandlearn.com/newsletters/index.cfm.


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