Business Writing Tips from The Writing Center
Flow and Format: Use Headings (4)
November 1, 2007
Use
informative headings in instructional documents and in persuasive
documents such as brochures, recommendations and proposals.
Informative headings
capture the main points or gist of the information that follows. They
are particularly useful when you are concerned that the reader might not
have the time--or the inclination--to do more than scan a document.
Informative headings ensure that even a cursory reading will leave the
reader with an understanding of the main ideas or benefits. Like
newspaper headlines, these headings also draw the reader into the text.
In the
following example, informative headings capture the gist of the
information for the reader who does not take time to read the text:
SUBJECT: IMPLEMENTING OUR YEAR 2008 SAFETY PROGRAM
Safety Program Action Items
On August 7, 2007, we discussed
our Action Plan reflecting findings in the Workers' Compensation Cost
Analysis Report and our progress on the following items:
- Distribute
Management Safety Policy Statement. The Safety Committee will
distribute a management policy statement to employees later this
month. This statement, communicating our company's commitment to
health and safety, will help kick off our new safety efforts.
-
Distribute Written Safety Rules. With the management policy
statement, employees will also receive a list of written safety rules
for them to sign. These signed written safety rules will help document
our safety requirements as well as provide proof that employees were
told how to perform their jobs safely.
Next Steps:
Finalize November 20 Safety Meeting Agenda
I look forward to attending the November 30 meeting when we can present
the policy statement and written safety rules as well as discuss with
employees our new employee safety program. I will contact you before
this meeting to finalize the meeting agenda.
For readers who do read
the text, the headings preview and summarize the text. The text then
reinforces and drives home the messages in the informative headings.
Thus headings can guide
your reader from topic to topic, increase the interest level and
persuasiveness of your document, and help ensure that no items are
overlooked.
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